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found a lost birds scream
awakened from a dream
of lost red spiders and
autumn sun riders

clinging to walls of
wood, steel and laws
searching for calls of
redemption and flaws

bewinged I take air
in utter despair
lifted by childhood memories

like a red burning flare
I tenderly care
for the emptiness draped deep within us

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Inspired by :iconlinlith: and the poem at [link] I took a chance...

Thanks Kristine, for opening my eyes to remix poetry and for great inspiration.
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:iconfaeriecrone:
sounds like a true dream ...
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:icondajono:
dajono Feb 27, 2010   Digital Artist
dream true
red blue
old new
then who?

:thanks:
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:iconfaeriecrone:
yeah ... I am 'then who' every day.
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:iconwh0rem0ans:
what is remix?
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:icondajono:
dajono Jan 26, 2010   Digital Artist
best described by following the link above.
In short: some people decides to let one of them write a poem, send it to the next who writes a poem using parts of the first, sends it to the next and so on until everyoen have written several poems, then you have a lot of remixed poems ... I think.
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:iconwh0rem0ans:
cool! thanks ...

I heard one once where one uses lines from different songs. I did it with lines from different Fleetwood Mac songs, for example.
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:iconlinlith:
Linlith Jan 24, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
så gøy at dette får videre ringvirkninger! :clap:
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:icondajono:
dajono Jan 24, 2010   Digital Artist
multidimensjonal internajonal hviskelek...
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:iconlinlith:
Linlith Jan 24, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
ikke sant!?
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